Thanks! After the gamejam ranking ends, I'll be able to upload a fixed version of this demo.
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Really like the artstyle and character design! I'm interested in seeing where this goes with the setting and the themes you have going on. I feel for the main character, to me at least it felt like struggling with anxiety which is a relatable feeling.
Some things that did stick out to me was spelling/grammar, but just spend a little time on editing the script in the future and it should be fine. I also second another commenter's suggestion of some intense music stings to mesh with the more anxious moments of the game.
I really liked the music and the progression of tracks here - the beginning areas feel so happy and calm compared to the night forest scene. It's also fitting that moving forward is what progresses the story even though there are times you don't want to do that; like in Trixie's area I had an 'aww man' moment where I felt bad and didn't want to leave her behind but it was time to move on. Nice work overall.