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Try not to look at the novel as a job. *Most people are just happy to read what you're capable of putting out and don't expect you to apologise for anything. Keep up the great work

Fuck yes Nomax 💋 These look incredible

Don't be hard on yourself. This is some good stuff

This was phenomenal! God, all of the characters are fantastic. The ferret is my favourite. Great work! 

Hey Vent. Just wanted to say that I love your visual novel so far. You've done really well and I hope that you also see that your hard work has paid off.

good work. Keep it up

Also, are you the artist for the characters? They're very good

That picture is adorable. Merry Christmas.

And a happy 2024 😭

chapter 2 🙏🙏

This was fantastic. Really promising. Visually captivating and the writing is solid. Well done

Keep up the great work :)

No need to apologise. All the best!

This looks great. All the best!

Hmm, you chose the middle ground, not outright rejecting it, neither fully accepting it.

Fair enough!

Take care of yourself OwO

Do you like pineapple on your pizza?  ÒwÓ

Bout to start some shit haha

Proud of you Nomax

This was really promising. All the best going forward :)

Take care of yourself

this was cute

Yes...and then there is a group scene where it all comes together. What I was trying to say (in my own botched way, I guess) was that the routes/characters could be more exclusive. This could cut out scenes like the cafes or library and could even shorten stuff like the shared nightmare, cutting out the other characters so that you don't know what happened on their end unless you play it. Atm, it seems that no matter what route you pick, the others are still going to have a huge impact on the mystery. What I was trying to say is that you could make them a bit more useless. Maybe have an instance where the group decides to quit the project or is told too by the school but the main character and chosen interest keep pursuing it in secret

Yessss. I am sated. Thank you 🙏

Quick question but is my favourite rat going to have his own build? OwO

Personally, I feel like you're essentially writing 4 vn's. One being the mixed story about the murder and the others being about the romantic interests. If you could find a way to combine the 'dates' and the mystery progressions, you could ease your artwork. For instance, Leighs route has you find evidence that is different to Oscars, but they both lead to the same progression with the mystery. Then, you could actually cut out the mixed sections where you would have to somehow tie it all together again with the others.

Eg. In Leighs route, Oscar and Lucas are nothing more than supporting characters.

Atm, the initial choice of who you interact with after class always leads to the entire group becoming acquainted anyway. You could make it more exclusive

Sorry for the rant lol

Love your work. Thank you

Good stuff

Take care of yourself 

You're really doing well with this VN. Well done

Thank you Jerm

Love this. Honestly, that was an amazing update.

Also, what is the name of the song you used during the bar hallucination that Grey experiences in ND? The trumpety/jazz one

Love you work

That was really interesting to read. Thank you

Good stuff! Hope you're well

This is a hectic idea. Take it easy and I can't wait to read it ;)

Hope you're doing well

Why have I only just found this??? It's 5 o'clock in the morning and now this. Welp. Thank you project echo!

You need to stop apologising. This VN is worth the wait :)

Love the style. Well done

Good to hear from you Ritch
Merry Chrissie

Thanks for the update. Love yas :)

@developer Thank you for this lighthearted, warm, beautifully drawn game.  Hope you enjoyed creating it as much as I did playing it