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Thank you for your interest! I really wanted a L+F game where the PCs each had an extra power, and my goal was for the Talents to add a fun bonus layer to situations.

Ran this as a one shot at my table and it was great! I set it on a hill overlooking Lake Onda, with Gatsby as a former Schleswig noble, and 'Daisy' as a vague eldritch being. Our Wretched Royal rode their horse through the whole house, it was all super provocative and the final battle was epically bloody!

My only critique is that a couple of the rooms (like the Guest Bedroom and both bathrooms) were a bit boring as-is. I added a torn up corpse of a priest of the basilisks in the GB where the players found a little lore hinting at 'Daisy' and the occult nature of the party. I put a random encounter in the small bathroom (it was the drug dealer, on the toilet).

I also hid a sneaky Blood Drenched Skeleton in the spa bathroom, in the tub which was full of blood instead of towels, so it jumped out at the players and attacked with a spiky loofah.

Everything else was true to your module and we loved it!

Yeah, I think it's mostly on my end. I tried to be too literal with the prompt is all. Oh well

Thanks, I wish I could go back and improve it now. Looking over all the other submissions, I think I took the prompt of "create a mini adventure to be played in 1 hour" too literally and tried to make an "adventure path" around my idea.

Loving this, lol!

This looks EPIC, will be reading