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Most clues are pretty easy when you pay attention. I think the hardest ones to figure out are for Arceus, and that suits her well.

A shame to hear, but you do what you have to. You've given us a lot of game for just one guy, and I think I speak for all of us when I say we appreciate it. Good luck in whatever comes next.

The seeming paragraph break is in the first paragraph after the word "seasons".

Not surprised this update took longer than the others. It's impressive how much there is added in every chapter, especially on the ship. Anyway, I found a handful of bugs in the Gen V stuff and some typos throughout. Hopefully none of these were me getting distracted while going through as much of the content I could.

Bugs:

At each of the Sword of Justice scenes, one of the options right before you meet the legend personally brings you to them when it seems like it shouldn't. The Surfboard for Cobalion, and the Machete for both Terrakion and Virizion. Maybe some wires crossed between them?

Typos:

1. There's a stray "I"  that should be a "You" in the Poliwhirl fishing scene, in the paragraph where she climaxes.
2. There's a typo in the Magikarp pussy scene where it says "Grabher" in the paragraph after she makes lick sounds
3. At the end of the Lugia "They're all Cute" scene there's a missing "s" for "makes."
4. In the Johto Kitchen seen, there's a missing "n" to make the word "then" at the start.
5. The Jirachi line at the Kitchen when leaving Hoenn seems to be missing.
6. Celebi's Hoenn line at the Kitchen seems to be a repeat of the Johto line, although that feels weirdly appropriate with Celebi.
7. The word "than" was accidentally replaced with "that" at the end of the first Holiday Stanza
8. There is an "is" that's meant to be an "as" at the end of Deoxys' Holiday Stanza
9. Might be a browser issue, but there seems to be an extra paragraph break when you begin the Unova intro.
10. There's an extra "e" added to the number three when you choose Wings right before Virizion
11. Virizion is misspelled as "Verizion" once in the scene after you catch her.
12. Shortly after the Swords "smile with delight" in the Keldeo scene, Keldeo's name is uncapitalized.
13. There is a missing "s" for capitalization of "others" in Cobalion's first line on Terrakion's version of the Sword Scene
14. The word "losers" is mispelled in Meloetta's breeding scene.

How did you get her to 0 in the intro scene? When I got 6 correct options in a row, the game simply progressed.

Edit: Realized that you probably got confused by some part of her being an unbeatable boss and the counter defaulting to 0 after a while.

The perfect scenario for that fact may come to pass: A small eternity ago, someone suggested a side/ship scene where the MC and Keldeo spitroast Mew with Keldeo's resolute form, and Chainsaw considered basically giving Keldeo a strap-on.

On a similar vain, I like how unique the Legends are all presented as. Adds a lot to the game that they have slightly distinct kinks and personalities, and that the overlaps there are feel pretty deliberate like with Groudon and Kyogre.

Either her or Lunala. If it's Hoopa, she probably loses from being smaller, and if it's Lunala it's probably from being less experienced.

Had a couple side scene related ideas. First, it would be fun to have a Skitty/Delcatty as a reference to the Hot Skitty on Wailord Action meme. Even have a good opportunity to introduce it since May has a Skitty in the anime and she was also out for the Wailord. The excuse could be that May's researching how a Pokemon that small can fit that much cock, and maybe part of the scene could be escalating the MC's size inside of her. Probably steps on Mew's toes a bit though.

Second thing is a couple of small thoughts for the Contest Minigame you mentioned at the Fishing Preview. Could use the MC's knowledge of Pokemon breeding and say he's there to help with pedigree breeding or the like. I also think it would be cool to use Purugly with this premise, but there's not much rationale there besides that a Purugly would stacked.

Sorry, should have specified, meant in spite of the pre-existing breeding kink. Mostly just thought the bit about Maple figuring that part out from her would be funny.

I would like to suggest that the reason Xerneas never got pregnant before the MC was since she intimidated most other Pokemon like Maple said Legends do at the start. She's probably how the scientists figured that out too.

It was gonna be a thing where one of the Legends (a while back I suggested that it be Solgaleo) is from an alternate dimension. Not sure if that one was gonna start out evolved or not, or if we'd travel to that dimension.

Fun thought I had, would Eternatus ever help a size queen like Mew by dynamaxing both them and the MC to get fucked by something even more hyper?

If the MC used a Dark-Type penis, would anal get a Same Type Attack Bonus?

Makes a certain kind of sense since Eternatus doesn't show up on its own in the games, and it makes things a bit more of a direct story than other parts of the game. Sounds like you have some ideas that that'd be fun to see.

It's hard to choose, but I really liked Cressalia. The use of dream logic and her ship scenes are funny, and I kind of liked how she was interested in the MC in advance.

I had a set of ideas related to the Gen 8 Legends based on someone's old suggestion. It was something where you'd need help from Zacian and Zamazenta to beat Eternatus before having the MC Dynamax his dick to fuck her.

My idea is that it would be fun if you had to fight Eternatus before catching the wolves. This would match the order of events in Sword and Shield, and give Zacian and Zamazenta funny potential since they would see the insane sight of you fucking Eternatus before you get them in the harem.

From there, my specific idea is that one of the two wants to get the same Dynamaxed pleasure from the MC. It would be a reference to the post-game where they get hit with Galar Particles by Sordward and Shielbert. The difference would be that Zacian or Zamazenta would want it to happen to them. Just like in the originals they aren't able to Dynamax and the particles would just enrage them... possibly since they can't have colossal dick like the cannon dragon. Then it'd be a normal fight and breeding scene.

The mechanic where you could change day/night was by entering the mirror world, yeah. Since the original Sun and Moon dex said Solgaleo and Lunala were male and female counterparts, it's been my head canon that in the OG games Nebby had a child with the Legend in that world.

On that note, if you have to lock this world's Nebby to one of the two Evos, I think Lunala would make sense. That way, the otherwise male Solgaleo from another world could be under the same R63 rules as Team Rainbow Rocket.

Had issues similar to the guy below, but after an unfortunate amount of waiting the game itself loads and seems to work, other than a separate issue I found. Might be something with old laptops and/or AMD components.

The separate issue I had with the downloadable version is that the resolution won't behave properly. There are only 2 normal resolutions available, both larger than my laptop supports on its screen, and the fullscreen doesn't adjust properly.

Editing to add: the main issue was text getting cut off even in Full Screen, and apparently the browser version seems to work fine on the same laptop. Probably some difference caused by the reduced animation quality.

There's a lot that's worth saying about this update being finished since I played through all of the content, but I will only mention the most important and a small bug I found that wasn't fixed. You have somehow exceeded my expectations for just how much content there could be this update. The Ship scenes alone are a lot, and all of the content and jokes there landed extremely well for me. I have no idea how you managed to keep this much variety between all of the different Legends through this full thing, but somehow you did.

As for the bug, if you pick Flashlight in the final branch before Giratina there is an error message about <</replace>>. Doesn't seem to cause any problems, but I checked and it wasn't fixed in the update.

I kinda disagree, mostly on the basis that it fits the silly tone that most of the writing goes for.

The emotional rollercoaster of software

First, the original idea is a very funny excuse to breed the Rotom.

Second, that would have to be one massive washing machine for Regigigas to be in. Guess that's why she's stuck though.