Not surprised this update took longer than the others. It's impressive how much there is added in every chapter, especially on the ship. Anyway, I found a handful of bugs in the Gen V stuff and some typos throughout. Hopefully none of these were me getting distracted while going through as much of the content I could.
Bugs:
At each of the Sword of Justice scenes, one of the options right before you meet the legend personally brings you to them when it seems like it shouldn't. The Surfboard for Cobalion, and the Machete for both Terrakion and Virizion. Maybe some wires crossed between them?
Typos:
- There's a stray "I" that should be a "You" in the Poliwhirl fishing scene, in the paragraph where she climaxes.
- There's a typo in the Magikarp pussy scene where it says "Grabher" in the paragraph after she makes lick sounds
- At the end of the Lugia "They're all Cute" scene there's a missing "s" for "makes."
- In the Johto Kitchen seen, there's a missing "n" to make the word "then" at the start.
- The Jirachi line at the Kitchen when leaving Hoenn seems to be missing.
- Celebi's Hoenn line at the Kitchen seems to be a repeat of the Johto line, although that feels weirdly appropriate with Celebi.
- The word "than" was accidentally replaced with "that" at the end of the first Holiday Stanza
- There is an "is" that's meant to be an "as" at the end of Deoxys' Holiday Stanza
- Might be a browser issue, but there seems to be an extra paragraph break when you begin the Unova intro.
- There's an extra "e" added to the number three when you choose Wings right before Virizion
- Virizion is misspelled as "Verizion" once in the scene after you catch her.
- Shortly after the Swords "smile with delight" in the Keldeo scene, Keldeo's name is uncapitalized.
- There is a missing "s" for capitalization of "others" in Cobalion's first line on Terrakion's version of the Sword Scene
- The word "losers" is mispelled in Meloetta's breeding scene.