A really cute time! You had a really interesting take on Seija's character; I've never been too into this ship because of how Seija acts, but I loved the connection between the two. It was really sweet to read, and I enjoyed how it tied into the Touhou canon too, though the dialogue could be awkwardly paced at times. The minigames were okay, though I do wish some of them were a little more fleshed out. The game where you dodged the YinYang Orbs was fun to play, and I liked the cloak game during the reprise at the end, though everything else was a little too simplistic I'd say, and the presentation on some of them was a little messy. I also found it off how music wasn't present during a lot of the cutscenes too, it made some scenes feel a little barren at times. The music that was present was pretty well composed though, and as I said, Seija and Shinmy had a really cute connection! Despite its flaws, I still very much enjoyed it; it was a fun little read!
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