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Thank you!

I am sick with a head cold right now but there was some things you said I want to ask for some clarification (mainly because I do agree with you) and ways to maybe improve when going into polishing book 2. Please keep checking back because when I feel better, I would love to discuss some of these points with you. Also, I really want to thank you for an actual review of the game. While you don't agree with everything I have done you have listed it all out respectfully and I cannot express how rare that is. So, thank you so much for the thought and care you put into this.

Pen is going to be an RO. I'm not sure at what point it is going to be presented as an option in the game but it will for sure be this book. Also still unsure about whether there will be a poly route. If there is, it will be a V poly.

I don't know how many chapters there will be. I don't plan my chapters out and instead just kind of go with the flow. I do know it will be longer than book 1 so over twelve chapters.

And as for how many books in the series, there will be three in total.

I'm so glad you are enjoying it!

Thank you!

Oh, I don't actually know  how many hours there are. There are at least 50 stories, if not a little more. They are all a few pages long.

Expect nothing to be carefree. Even the route I wanted to be carefree (Hazel) has turned into a horror show. LOL!

As for the end of book 1, there is no variation to the outcome. Kind of a play on Fate and how much of a nightmare that can be. However, book 2 is going to be dealing with that repercussion and also have multiple endings.

I am looking at a way to do that for the final version. Twine is a bit finicky with stuff like that but I can't be the only one in that position. 

Okay. That has been working for everyone else so I'm not sure what is happening because that would be something on your end. However, when the next chapter does come out, I am going to do an entirely new file and upload. I'm transferring everything to a new file to make sure there is no lingering issues from the Twine update they did. Hopefull that should fix it.

In the meantime, does anyone else have suggestions? I haven't heard where this hasn't worked for people.  Usually deleting the cache and restarting the game from scratch fixes it.

This is a WIP. There will be a platonic route at some point (as I've stated multiple times it will be in the final copy). It is not abandoned. I currently have someone in my family dying and therefore, they are more important. But even if none of that was true,I would suggest trying to write over a million words in a year, which include about a dozen routes, learn how to code a game, and also live your life at the same time. Then talk to me about how you feel punished. When you have done it, you can come talk to me. I'm done with this.

Did you delete your browser cache and start from the beginning? You have to delete everything your computer has saved with it and start a new game.

Hi,

I am currently working on this bug. It may take a bit of time but I will post an update when that is all smoothed out. I'm not sure what happened yet and I have a feeling there is a random code somewhere that is causing the glitch.

Its through a conversation with him and Bella after the incident with Kavatti

Hi,

As you go through the prologue and chapter one you have the option to do all of that.

It shouldn't be a constant. Twine updated not too long ago and I'm starting to wonder if the document I write in is not compatible with it anymore. There is something very strange going on with it all. I will usually post a note though if there is a chapter you need to start from and click through for a coding situation. Or I will put in backdoor codes and clean it up on the final version. Thank you for letting me know what is going on.

You can break up with Milo in chapter five. I'm not sure if there will be a new romance code that will happen until the final product however. I'm wanting to get the story down rather than create more paths. When I have the final release, I'll narrow down what feels right for the characters more.

So it's been different for everyone's phone. Some people can get it to work just fine with the zip file. My own phone works that way. Others have had to have joiplay or whatever app they are comfortable with. Unfortunately, if very much seems like a trial and error situation to see what works for your phone.

So with this being the WIP version, most of the UI is not created yet. Most likely I'll be focusing on that more towards the end of the wip and have it for when it becomes a full game.

She is close to six foot with her heels on. Without, she's about 5'8"

Nope. No difference. The art that was uploaded to Steam was a requirement for the game to get running due to their company model. But the game is exactly the same on either platform.

There shouldn't even be a link to that. It's just in the game. If you want, send me a screenshot of it but that is not something that is in the paid version of the game so I'm not sure what is going on with yours.

There is not a play to browser situation at the moment. What are you playing the game on? 

Great question! Yes there will be. I post the chapter two weeks early on Patreon and then it is released public.

The angst is for sure coming. :)

Hi,

I know there are people who have gotten it to work on iPhone. I'm not an Apple user so I can't test it myself. You should be able to just unzip the file, however, and play from the executable there. If not, please come over to the discord. Any one of the members there would be able to help trouble shoot it. I really wish I could help further but I just don't have an apple product to test any of it on other than my friends iPad.

Discord link is this https://discord.gg/akzhPTZMV5

It eventually will but Steam has an approval process so it will take some time. I'm not going to start the process either until afterthe first of the year.

Yes. Things have gotten a bit too hectic in my personal life so I didn't have time or  content or a bug upate yet.

It's the second chapter to the book 2 wip

Oh! No! Thank you for the heads up. I'll get that fixed with the next chapter.

HI, I'm so sorry. I didn't see this. Yes. It will be released on Steam. I just am getting caught up in the review process there.

Oof. You are in right at the beginning, I'm afraid. So, obviously book one is up for purchase (I just have to make sure that you know because some people are unaware) but I just started writing this one. The good news is that I'm a pretty frequent updater. It only took me a year to write the first book in its entirety. Chapter two is about halfway written now and then it will be off to the beta's. Early access always goes up on Patreon first and then about two weeks later it is released to the public. I usually make an announcement here and over on Tumblr when I have early access out.

Thank you for reading!

You're welcome!

If anyone else can help them on this thread, please feel free to hop in. But you really should just be able to google how to do it. It would probably give you the visuals you would need.

Without seeing the kind of tablet you have I can't really walk you through it. I would maybe google it. It should be in a drop down screen though when you click on the file. 

Hi, so you will need to unzip the game and then play with the html application. It should say index

There is one for each RO this book.

Hi, 

Is there a way you could give me a screenshot of where that is?

Hi honeypott,

Did you choose to split your time between getting the mirror and answers? If so, it is a bug I am working on this evening. There should be a patch tomorrow. I'm so sorry for the inconvenience.

Hi,

During the wip process, some people reported it worked just fine while others struggled with it. I did code the new release or mobile and it did work on mine but I am unsure how it works elsewhere. My suggestion would be to see if the free demo runs on your mobile device first. They have the same javascript in them.

I hope this helps.

Hey!

I wanted to drop a quick note here that I am going to read what you wrote up above. I have a terrible head cold right now so when I tried to I wasn't understanding it. Thats me. Not you.  In the meantime, we also have a discord for a lot of these discussions if you are interested in joining.  I'll probably be taking some parts of what you commented on here and present it to the discord and chat about it over the weekend. It's a great place to workshop what can go into the current edits. :)

I'll get back to you in a few days but thank you so much for reading and supporting the kickstarter!

Zinnia

https://discord.gg/Ye5kxuB3

Oh that's a weird one. I haven't gotten it reported yet. I'll take a look at it tonight.  Can I ask which romance route you are on because he might be specific to that.