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Yup, makes sense to me and I'm okay with that, thanks!

So corruption isn't really to my tastes per se, though neither is it a deal-breaker.

That being said, is the corruption mandatory, and how far will it go? I'd at least like to have some idea of what I'm in for, as having the right expectations helps swallow the parts I might not be a fan of.

"Indecent"?

Ditched her to bang in the toilet?

Ohh, I see! I completely missed that button, maybe it should have a line break after the colon to format it the same way as the pronouns?

Hey, so there are a bunch of instances early on right after your first encounter that specifically refer to the imposing stranger as a man, even though I chose female pronouns.

"To them, the man's send-off was genial. Familiar, even."

"You don't know if you want to turn around and confront the man so nonchalantly intimidating, crawl into a hole, puke, or get home and forget about the night entirely."

"Oh, god, what if it's the man from last night? You glance at the takeout bag."

"Not that there is anyone in this city who would recognize your name or your face except for maybe your landlord. And the man who rescued you."

I only just started so I don't know how many there are, but maybe a CTRL-F through the script for "man" would be prudent, as I get the impression you have a rather firm picture of the character in your mind when writing.

EDIT: Well, that was neat! Definitely keeping my eye on this one.

Hot damn, consider this contract signed.

Seriously though, I do rather like the art, do you have a portfolio or streaming account somewhere by any chance?

Haha, well, I appreciate the warning.

Unfortunately though, I think I'm skipping this one. While I do like my themes dark and stories serious, I'm not very fond of walking away depressed or anxious, and yandere are, uhh... kinda spooky to me.

Okay, really spooky.

Ahh, more relentless misery, I take it? Interesting premise, but I can't help but think I can't handle this particular brand of bad vibes.