Ahh, more relentless misery, I take it? Interesting premise, but I can't help but think I can't handle this particular brand of bad vibes.
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It is a pretty grim story, indeed!
This story does have some of my favourite characters I've written to date (I think they're all pretty interesting; especially the main character), but I can imagine some people finding the content upsetting. It might be best to give it a miss if you think it will bother you.