AJFHADKFJHEGF Thank you!!! I worked really hard on this, so your kind words mean the world to me :3
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I was hoping you would comment again! Thank you again for taking the time to give me constructive criticism. I completely agree with all you have said, and I will make some edits to help alleviate some of the shortcomings. I genuinely appreciate the time and effort you put into making this a better read. <3
I cannot thank you enough for your kind words!!! I love all of the feedback you've given me and I am taking it to heart. I've already written 60k words so it may be a little hard to get some of the things, but the rest of the feedback and criticisms I can do! I will work on these and try to get an update for the first chapter ASAP. Thank you again for taking the time to dive into this. I was really nervous about posting the first chapter, but you going so in-depth tells me I must have done a pretty good job and motivates me to keep going.