Absolutely beautiful--I've been struggling to get into solo RPGs and yet this one got me writing three and a half pages in my journal for my very first entry. Definitely one I'm coming back to again and again!
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Hey, sorry it took so long to get back to you--been super busy!
So I think the first thing is that there's a lot of information and I think it would be better laid out with properly formatted headers. Some paragraphs also jump off the line, like Allure and Wit on page 3, which can look very disorienting.
Like I said, there is a lot of substance to this, and I honestly think you would be better served dividing your core concepts into proper chapters so we can pace ourselves instead of having one concept follow another immediately.
While there are some grammatical and spelling errors, those are fixable in the long run and honestly I would first focus on getting it into a nice readable state by focusing on layout. That's my two cents for now--please let me know if you have any questions!
Hey tyhulse!
I just wanted to say, I think this could be a really great system for most RPGs and not just cozy ones. Definitely a document I would adapt to introduce newbies to the hobby! That being said, I did notice some typos and layout issues that I think, if corrected, would make this much more readable. Would you be open to receiving suggestions?
Again, thank you for creating this--it's a really great resource!
Hi JV! :)
I was wondering--I've been following PUM for a few weeks now and I'm really excited to see where you're going with this. Was just wondering, would it be possible to have the 4.2 version up for a while longer? I missed out on it and I was wondering if I could look at the differences between 4.2 and 4.3.
Thank you!
I don't really care what country. I do think this attitude is more widespread amongst Americans, having lived here for a while both as a minority and as someone who lived outside the country, and it's really easy to see this kind of attitude from people here. Admittedly, they may be from some other country. I don't really care.
But maybe pick a better fight than 'ohno she picked on America' instead of using ad hominem because you can't attack my points.
Not gonna lie, as someone who has family outside of the States and has lived outside of this country, this game is not only reductionist but also extremely insulting.
Please, please educate yourself before producing something like this again. It's reducing people to minority stereotypes rather than treating them as people.