Loved the new update and I'm glad there is now an option for Yoon during the bachelorette party. Also thank you for pointing out Zoe and Yoon's inexperience with BDSM and the fact that need to do some research.
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First off, this is a pretty cool game. I really like the different paths and characters, however there are some issues(mostly minor) that really bug me.
The House Party: aside from the pointless mini games, it's the option to Drink More that doesn't make sense. It goes nowhere. No matter how much she drinks, the outcome is the same. Why even have the option?
The Montages: we see her becoming more confidant and self assured, only to have her go back to being shy and timid when the story resumes.
The Club, this is only here, because we see what happens when she drinks too much it just makes the option at the house party make even less sense.
The Runaway Bride: I did not like this update, I tried to , but I just couldn't get into it. It felt forced and like you were trying to hard to do a Bridesmaids/ Bad Moms type scenario, with an out of nowhere sex scene that doesn't fit the character; on any path.
Overall I enjoy the game, but I would like to see a little more consistency with the character. I look forward to the next update.
A nice little wish fulfillment, and lighthearted take on what would normally be terrifying. So far it's pretty good, but would be better if the images remained consistent with the description. (Megan restrained, but her hands are free. Suit & tie, instead of pajamas. )
It looks like a fun little romp with promising potential. Looking forward to see where this goes.
A decent start, if a bit repetitive and perhaps a tad annoying. Caretaker Friend Friendie; these are just awful. I get why you did it, but here's a tip; if you're going to put a game on Patreon, don't make it taboo. It cheapens your story. You could easily tell the same story without violating the rules and having to come up with ridiculous substitutes.
Another way to go about it, is to allow the player to set the relations between characters.
This game is gorgeous. I haven't seen high quality pixel art like this in a long time. There's a nostalgic look that takes me back to to games of yore like, Metal & Lace, Snatcher and It Came From the Desert.
I clicked on Read... not sure what I was expecting, but it certainly wasn't that. If you decide to add some other 'gems' might I suggest, The Room, Twilight or Fifty Shades of Grey?
Joking aside; you guys have done an amazing job and I look forward to future content.
A good game so far with an attribute system that doesn't always know what it's doing. The automatic attribute checks are all over the place, mainly on the Submissive or Badass paths. The Hero path seems to be its own thing. No matter the stats Luna is a Hero
Of the 3 paths I find the Badass path the most interesting. It's a shame Luna can't be an Incorruptible Badass; in the vain of Batman or Rendel, (that would awesome) but that's wishful thinking lol.
The Submission path is beautifully done.
The Hero path is my least favorite as it makes Luna too vulnerable and easy to manipulate. Perhaps you are going for the Tragic Hero route; a Hero based on self sacrifice, which is a valid path and could be quite interesting to follow.
A small pet peeve; Refusing to rat out the cops should not be seen as an act of submission. We already know she doesn't fear the cops and she doesn't trust the Feds (the authority) It is an open act of defiance. If anything, it should just be a neutral option.
Looking forward to future updates.
Gluttony has entered the battle.
Me: Bring it on!
Many combinations of Barrier and Wraith later, Gluttony's health is just below half.
Me: You want more? Plenty more where that came from! (Looks at mana pool...) or not. Aether Blade +3 mp. This might take awhile. OK Katt I'm counting on you.
Katt attacks +3 damage
Gluttony is planning something
Me: Aether Blade +3 mp. Woot next round I can cast Barrier
Katt attacks +3 damage
Gluttony attacks +23 damage Gluttony is planning something
Me: it's OK we got this. Decides to cast Wraith instead of Barrier for the extra mp. +23 dmg +5mp woo-hoo!
Katt attacks +9 dmg
Me: wait, why didn't she heal me?
Gluttony attacks +23 dmg Gluttony is planning something
Me: um Katt I really need you right about now. Aether Blade +4mp Really need you.
Katt attacks +3dmg
Me: Seriously! It's OK I have faith in you. Aether Blade +3mp
Gluttony attacks +25dmg Gluttony is planning something
Me: I'm bleeding out over here, I could really use the best Healer in the college, like right now.
Katt cast Healing
Me Finally! +5hp ... This is because I spied on you in the bath isn't it?
Gluttony attacks.... Game over
I love this game, but seriously Katt, is the worst Healer ever.
He believes his game has potential, and he is interested in playing future updates.
Some bugs in the game progression: sometimes it'll just come to a stand still, then continue after an in-game week. There is an event loop if you decide to back out of Cecilia's photoshoot at the studio making it impossible to progress. There is a dialog loop when confronting Clair about the affair.