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I am so sorry you read this for a bedtime story, mate, haha. But also, thank you!

Thank you! I shall remember to include a "The End" or credits in the future, as well.

It's a pretty interesting idea that I enjoyed.

It's fairly short, I can see the usage of the music, and I overall think it's pretty good.

It's pretty good. The game keeps my attention and has me thinking a bit about my choice before making it. I can see how the chosen songs have inspired its creation.

This is just the French version, which is a language I don't understand. So I'm going to say my review of the English version still stands for this one.

I enjoy the mixture of the songs and have enjoyed the game as well. A bit tense and mysterious.

I enjoy the mixture of the songs and have enjoyed the game as well. A bit tense and mysterious.

Although the game is fine, it doesn't interest me. Though I can also say that I stubbornly chased an ending and the one I got is enhanced by the chosen song.

The game is pretty good. I like how tense it can be and I did like replaying it. Personally, I think playing it with the song in the background enhances it.

There are multiple things in the game that hit me personally. The UI of the game and the backgrounds of the page are an excellent example of combining them to make the experience that much better. I loved Caspian.

Alone, I am moved by the game, but with the pillows playing (as recommended), I am beyond tears.

Truly a wonderful game and I had a great time reading it. And I hope you know that despite the difficulty you had in finishing it, it was well worth getting the chance to read it.

The only sort of "bad thing" I can think of is a, perhaps, grammatical error, which was: 

"Still, it reminds me of another another memory from back then, of the game we used to play"

There are multiple things in the game that hit me personally, such as the "See you later," thing. I very much did get something out of reading while listening to the pillows' song. The UI of the game and the backgrounds of the page are an excellent example of combining them to make the experience that much better. I loved Caspian and the little gifts.

Alone, I am moved by the game, but with the pillows playing (as recommended), I am beyond tears.

Truly a wonderful game and I had a great time reading it. And I hope you know that despite the difficulty you had in finishing it, it was well worth getting the chance to read it.

I do like the inclusion of a "Golden" eye description, which is something I personally like. Nice touch on the transition. There are however some grammatical errors. The story feels a bit slow for me, but considering the tension between the two characters, I can understand why that may be intentional.

I like the look of the pages, how the pictures signify the scenes, the usage of sound effects, and the humor. The usage of the song is top-notch, as well.

The reason I gave this a 4 instead of a 5 is because it's not my taste. But overall, it is a good game.

Thank you so much for telling me! It should hopefully be fixed.

Thank you!

The abruptness is fair criticism. I started writing within the last couple of days, so that could partly factor into it. I'm guessing the problem with Harvick is his magic? If so, that too is fair and I'll try to convey how the abilities of characters work, better in the future.