I personally think it's a great story and I can empathize with the protagonist. But I just feel that the content is a bit lacking, and it ended before I could get enough of it (qwq). And i also want to know that could you make a side story or gallery, sequel, spin-off, etc.? Li Taibai's character creation is pretty good. If there are story branches, I hope that the character creation can be as deep as Mr. Taibai (uwu). Then the cg and writing is very nice, I like the painting style very much, thank you (uwu).
ps: Occasionally, when a character is speaking, their name will be misplaced with the previous character's. The pace is a bit fast later on, and I really want to see the knife!! A lethal dose of knife!!!