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Happy 60!!!

Oh! I recognise the gui~

ok!

Yes! Maybe eye colours or skin/body types? Maybe different faces as well? I know those last few might be difficult. 

I see, thank you. 

is it possible to customise your character?

No rush! Your health is important! 

What pronouns does Ciras use? You used "her" and "he" for them. 

How old are the girls in this? 

How do I change the gallery names? "Ulric, Alice," etc,

i would prefer if there was a page with just the pronoun codes. 

How customisable is the protagonist?

Do you have an option for side scrolling or is it for top down only? 

Ay! Thanks for the pronoun options! not many VNs do that, especially these kinds :D

Is there a bug with the Tao visit quest? 

Can there be an option for the MC to be gender nuetral/can have their own pronouns? 

Looks interestin!

Do we need to download all updates?

How do you get to the wasteland? where on the map do you go? 

Its in there! Should be a quest you can get from Arion or Hayden, Arion usually is a bit easier to find

You don't have to go to the second floor! There should be an area with a question mark, explore the first floor a bit at night!

Where is the under tunnel? I think i've done it already, but its not there

How does one get to the wasteland?

I have 3 hearts with Bernard and 1 heart with hayden, how do I activate the little thing with them?

"Prepare a meal" is a bit formal, "did you cook something?" or "did you make some grub?" would feel a bit more natural, for example. 

"Rodents and Rabbits were in huge misunderstandings with Foxes" is also a bit odd grammatically, "Rodents and Rabbits had big misunderstandings about Foxes" reads a bit better. 

But I get the idea of the story pretty well, and the characters are pretty interesting! I hope we get to see more of them!

You might want to ask a friend to proofread some of your dialogue, most of it is alright, but some of it feels rather forced, or unclear. However, the art style and idea is quite good! I hope you move forward with this project!

I wish there was an option to change pronouns....

What's the code? 

Are you able to figure out the problem with Argo's contract in Arts? 

I didn't see the mysterious letter, I might've skipped over it, does anyone have a transcript or screenshot of the scene or what it might've said? 

How do you get Jester's beer? 

That is much more helpful, thanks!

How do I find Tank, Scar and Jester? 

Ah, thanks. Didn't see that. 

umm, is the protagonist male or female