You might want to ask a friend to proofread some of your dialogue, most of it is alright, but some of it feels rather forced, or unclear. However, the art style and idea is quite good! I hope you move forward with this project!
"Prepare a meal" is a bit formal, "did you cook something?" or "did you make some grub?" would feel a bit more natural, for example.
"Rodents and Rabbits were in huge misunderstandings with Foxes" is also a bit odd grammatically, "Rodents and Rabbits had big misunderstandings about Foxes" reads a bit better.
But I get the idea of the story pretty well, and the characters are pretty interesting! I hope we get to see more of them!