im no word oriented person, but wow, ur writing is so emotional that it makes me feel emotions, and i don't really like to feel emotions, but reading even lil snippets of ur writings makes me feel emotions in a good/sad/grr way that i can't really express smartly. being open is scary but ur a brave molerat for sharing this
all in all, i think ur really good at what you do. and i support and root for u in whatever endeavors you traverse in the future :DDD
You cant leave me on a cliffhanger with an "Oh...*MC name" sort of cliffhanger
cake was smeared all over my lips when i dead eyed stared at the end of the demo screen
I honestly love your writing and this story. hope everything fares well for you in whatever youre doing!!!! And it was actually an easy read for me cause of the bare UI,my ADHD ass gets easily distracted when theres random stuff placed all over the screen so it only took me like 10 hours to read through the entire demo while it would normally take me days. sorry for the long comment but i like your story and will also be reading through 'Hybrid"
There are some passages where if you chose 'Ima' as a Male character, you instead get stuff like "she", "herself" and whatnot. maybe it happens if you chose them as a NB too? or as a girl? Anyways it was a bug I noticed during the Alexander scene with the gang
love it though :))) glad i came across this IF when i did
