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First off, gorgeous art and music! Much kudos to the people who put so much effort into it! I must admit I got a bit disappointed at the end as I wanted to continue the story and know more. :P A good teaser, I think. I also much appreciate the well functioning and easy-to-navigate interface over all, since that often seems to be an area that don't get as much love and attention as it might need when it comes to small indie games, alphas, and demos. :)
Wow. Just wow. The artwork, the story, but most especially... the sheer heart and effort put forth into the dialogue. Playing through this, you can feel the terror and love and heartache and weariness that Malcolm feels. You can bask in the cameradery of the pubgoers. You can hear almost every lilt and elision of Balgair's accent and dialect in your mind's voice, with no dropped letters in the text and only a few dialectical spellings... You and yours truly know the ancient and artful craft of the dedicated wordsmith.
I just started this last night, and I must say, I am blown away! From the art, to the music, to the characters, to the story, everything has a richness and depth that draws me in and keeps me wanting for more! I love how it paces itself and the person player, doesn't shy away from any of the topics it mentions (Malcolm dealing with some PTSD as a returning soldier for example)....and I'm only playing the Demo and just started chapter 2! Love the seque piece between night and day, the art for that is fantastic, the dream sequence was brilliant, and honestly I could go on. Tomorrow I will be opting in to Patreon so I can get the Early Access Build....I am looking forward to where this goes, because honestly, it has pulled me in by the heart-strings!
Hey, glad you enjoyed it, really appreciate the feedback!
We’re big fans of meaningful narrative and really happy it’s been this well received.
Good news is, we just uploaded Grace’s chapter 3 preview to the latest patron build, rounding out all of the chapter 3’s so far. So there’s should be a decent bit of story for you to explore :B
There are hidden achievements in the demo and the full game - obviously more in the full game right now. There will be more as we release more content as well.
The minigame should work, you can move left and right with the left and right arrow keys and click to move forward, might also be able to use space as well. If it’s not working I’m not sure what the issue is, some people on the discord might be able to diagnose it.
We’re currently translating the game into russian, I don’t know about other languages, if you’re interested in translating you’ll have to hope on the discord and talk to LittleNapoleon, our lead developer about it!
We probably won’t go up to ch4 with the free content unfortunately, but when they will eventually be released for a flat price on here. If you’re itching to play the newer chapters they are available in the patreon builds only for now :(
I think we have one more major demo update planned but it is a long time out.