I need feedback on the Voice Acted Story for The Space Sim. Its the first time I have ever written a story for a game and I want to know what people think. There is a section on the discussion board of the game for feedback, and I will also be checking this post! Thank You so much for giving this game a try and please let me know your thoughts about the story. Not so interested in feedback other than the story for now, but if you have any comments feel free to let me know!

Link - https://mager22brophybroncosorg.itch.io/the-space-sim

Hi Matthew, this game looks really beautiful. It's impressive. I like the ship varieties but I wish there was an encyclopaedia of sorts to know more about the stories/lore behind the ships. Also, I was stuck at level 6. But, I will return to the game later. The letters' displacement in the main menu is too much imo. It should be easier to read. Big lol at the fiber glass. All in all, Good job!

Thanks man! Thats great to hear! My friend had some of the same complaints when I played it with him. It was hard to know what the ships do. Just for a tip, the fighters are really good if you just place a whole ton of them! I was hoping the story was funny. I'll definitely take your feedback into consideration on the next project. Thank you for playing!!