I'm looking for feedback on a short interactive story: Paralyzed from head to toe, a famous painter finds themselves humbled by their new reality. Unable to communicate with the outside world, they see their strained relationship in a new light.
I'd love to get feedback on the overall story and characters. The full release will primarily be text-based, with portraits appearing for the different characters. Think Disco Elysium's dialogue system and portraits, pictured below, without the background visuals. Thanks so much for your time, any feedback would be very much appreciated!