Hello! The game looks fantastic. I love the title & colour scheme. I'm happy to share a few thoughts I had. Hope this helps! 

Some Thoughts I Had For The Visuals:
-It might just be me, but I do find it harder to see the black text on the dark red background. A lighter red might help make it stand out/contrast more.
-The banner at the top read as "away" to die, rather than "a way" to me because of the spacing.
-The screenshots & video look really solid and give me a great idea about what to expect from the game. 

Some Thoughts I Had For The Text:
-The phrase "enter the human body with a way to die" was a bit harder for me to read, even though the game title was capitalized. I think since the game title is already listed at the top, this first paragraph could just start with the sentence after it instead and it would still make total sense.
-The first bullet point about "a randomly generated body" also confused me a little bit, sorry. I think perhaps starting with something like "Hop into a randomly generated body, full of rooms for you to explore" might help?
-The bullet point about the immune system also read a bit jarringly and I'm not sure what this paragraph was trying to say (Beat wheels? Not paying attention?). Maybe try listing off each mechanic with a bit more specificity, "Fight the body's immune system and it will respond. The immune system can reinforce the body's cells, do X, and also Y."
-There's also a small typo after "event!" as the word "attack" is lowercase when it should be a capital "A."

Let me know if you have any questions or suggestions on how I can improve my feedback, thanks!