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Tales of Androgyny

A game about birds, bees, flowers and trees. · By Majalis

Rework for Kylila?

A topic by gandalff created May 28, 2018 Views: 1,816 Replies: 4
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Hello again

This time I want to suggest to visual rework for Kylila. I understand that it is impossible to please everyone, but Kylila is a partner, a femboy, a recurring character and I think that a character like that has to be very attractive, sexy, beautiful, etc.

But I think Kylila is pretty ugly if you compare her to Hiro or Trudy, and it's visually very different from them. The variety is good and trying different things is refreshing but Kylila does not feel part of the group (visually)

In my opinion, Kylila does not reflect the idea of her character. For example, Urka is an orc and a warrior, that is why she turns her back on you and looks at you with contempt, because you are weak and in this way she lets you know it. With her appearance and posture Urka makes you feel she is a strong warrior, her appearance and pose reflect the idea of her character. Kylila is supposed to be a elf, a elf is supposed to be beautiful, but Kylila is not very attractive. Your new character (a elf) said: "We are a proud and noble race", and I agree that this is what an elf should represent, but Kylila wears a very boring clothes, like torn rags. I think a proud elf would not wear such simple and unfeminine clothes, like a character that represents a elf Kylila is disappointing

It would be a shame for a main character to be wasted because he is not attractive, so I wanted to propose a rework for Kylila

I also wanted to give a couple of interesting ideas.
Kylila is a shy character, but she could also be cheerful with whom she has confidence (Hiro) as Suni from futadomworldb (Thank you for recommending this game xD), I love this character, her cheerful smile makes you want to continue talking with her and improve his relationship. I think it would be good that Kylila had a personality like Suni

It would be good if he had a upright posture like Hiro and Trudy, to put their illustrations together during combersations when camping and that the three of them feel part of a group. She could also have one hand holding her skirt with shyness (in the crotch) and the other covering her mouth, without forgetting a beautiful and feminine dress, preferably showing more skin like Hiro and Trudy

hand covering her mouth and hand holding her skirt with shyness

Kylila already has a partner (the turtle) but I think it would be more interesting if her partner was a female fairy, with a more cheerful and extroverted personality that Kylila pushes her to do things and often speaks for her, participates with Kylila in her sexual encounters, encouraging Kylila ("you can do it", "Show them what you have") and provoking on their enemies ("that's all you have", "I'm proud of his abilities", "be more rough, she can do it" , "this is not enough, she wants more"). Kylila is shy and submissive, so it would be great if she had a companion who spoke for her in a horny way and provoking her enemies to be rougher, while Kylila endure it as she can


Beautiful elf with beautiful clothes (the little girl)

I hope to hear something about the future of this character
Thanks for your hard effort

To all the above:

please no.

Sorry buddy, no offense intended at all, but seems that it's just a matter of personal tastes. Basically, you want the NPC you don't like, changed into something completely different that you like, and something which is really common and boringly overdone. I could type "hentai wwhflkmgljhft" and get 1482746596  results of 243649560 characters like those (little fists close to face, or *cringe* the damned "V" gesture). Again, personally, I'm sick tired of that empty, stereotyped manga. There's literally hundreds of manga games with that content.

For example, I like Kylira more than Trudy. If anything, it's Trudy who looks completely off: for someone that it's supossedly a though seasoned adventurer that beats monsters daily wielding a heavy battleaxe, she doesn't looks the part at all. And that's precisely what makes her original and interesting. She's a super girly-pink character, and she gets pissed off if you ask she's a he; she looks like a bubbly character but she's actually a warrior; she's a top, but uses his butt to top. Kinda like contradictory on his behaviour... and that's the beauty of it.

Now, Kylira it's an elf, true. Nothing says she's ugly or less attractive, and nothing says she should be otherwordly beautiful just because her race. Aaaand again, beauty it's a matter of tastes. Some might prefer the over-feminized looks, others might want a more "neutral" look. It's "androgyny" right there in the title after all (besides, maybe Mahalis have planned more future content to NPCs, regarding their looks, who knows!). 

Kylira wears regular clothing. Nothing spectacular, because she's as much as a noob as Hiro (let's say that Hiro's default clothes are the Enchantress, since it's the one depicted on images). Also, she's a lone wanderer, I doubt she'd be wearing princess clothes while roaming the woods searching for herbs and mushrooms. She's alone because she couldn't find a place among elves (one of the first things she says).
So basically, she's not the stereotypical "pretty-pretty shy girl-boy" that smells like bubblegum and has rabbits jumping around. It's a character that hasn't found "her way" yet, someone that doesn'treally knows what to do (pretty clear thru his dialog). Al in all, she's more the awkward-anywhere character rather than shy and bubbly.
When I see his picture, I feel it perfectly matches what we know of the character: and lone elf boy that likes to be "girly", and gets an awkward boner because  just found someone like her.

And I f***ing love the stoned turtle.

But hey, that's just my personal opinion! ;) 

Please don't do it!

I love how cute and innocent he looks, although at first I notice he was a little bit masculine (the jaw/lips) but that's the magic I think, I love how the bulge is always there too, the turtle is great and weird, so that's OK.


Also, would love, LOVE to see more bulges but with balls too not only penises :c

When I say a rework I do not mean to make a new character, I mean to improve Kylila, especially the clothes that I find too simple.
I also liked the personality (a partner to love), but do not think you'd like more if she had more feminine clothes, with more details, she may not show as much skin as Trudy and Hiro, but unless her clothes have more details and color, her clothes are a simple piece of brown fabric, her shoes have more detail.

Although the pose that I currently enjoy,  when Kylila Hiro and Trudy talk to each other in the camp, it would be better if Kylila had an illustration with a upright pose like Hiro and Trudy (I'm not sure I can adequately convey what I want to say with "feels bad or out of place", with my bad English, sorry)

About the turtle, it is not that I do not like it, but it has not had much more participation, I understand that there is a lot of work to do, but I understand that the turtle probably does not have much participation in Kylila's sexual encounters and that would limit the participation of He, I suggest the fairry as Kylila's partner on this occasion but he could also be a friend of Hiro's if he did not meet any other

I'm not saying that Kylila is bad as a character, but I would like a more detailed dress like the one Trudy has, more revealing, or maybe not

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Ah, I get what you mean.

Yea, she's kind of squatting, as if trying to hide the boner or in the middle of standing up. You want a pic of her standing up straight like most other characters, gotcha. Well, so far there's only one pic, so who knows what's in store in the future! :D

About clothes... I dunno, I kinda like the "rags". 
Note she really doesn't show much less skin than Hiro (who actually has his legs and arms covered -always speaking of the default look-). Maybe she's not interested in being dolled up, or doesn't knows how to. Trudy is sort of a tease, and clearly has more experience. Besides, Kylira's look match her personality: awkward, not sure, and accustomed to be alone. Kind of a wood's hermit.
Maybe a dolled-up version could be shown for the brothel (if/when you tell her to go there), that would make sense, as the Madam would want her "girls" to be "prettier". 
Or have some talk options where you can give her tips to dress "better"... she could ask, or having Trudy too in the party unlocks the option -she might criticize her looks and give her tips-, sort of how she scoffs at Urka.
In any case, this is maybe an aspect Majalis (they!) isn't interested in developing (since it doesn't really adds much in terms of game content), but remains to be seen how much RPGing aspects they're going to add.

You need to look at the big picture:
This is a game about androgyny, not straight up feminization. I don't think there's a real need to have everyone look like pretty k-pop girls.
-We have Hiro, which it's an adventurer, and looks somewhat "normal", more generic (what can be "normal" in game terms... not slutty or overtly super girly or produced. That can be achieved in-game). Physically it also looks more standard in proportions.
-We have Trudy, which it's quite the tease, sort of the "tsundere" type of character, flashy and produced. Physically she looks more voluptuos, it fits her role of being a show off (the type of cocky *pun intended* veteran adventurer)
-And Kylira, which is kind of the "adorable in their weirdness" character. Physically she seems slightly taller, even a bit lankier compared to Hiro and Trudy.
So, the big picture is quite varied and original.

I do agree the Turtle could have more interaction.
Facepalming at certain battle outgoing would be hilarious.