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Feedback for Apples&Leafs

A topic by PatrickIbach created Jan 12, 2023 Views: 252 Replies: 4
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Hey All!

I am new to game development and released my first game this week: Apples&Leafs

It is a fun little arcade game, but my game-page does poorly in converting views to actual customers. Some feedback on my game-page would be greatly appreciated.


Here are some questions:

- Do you like or dislike the banner being a GIF?

- Is there too much text?

- Are there any information missing?

- Would you like more screenshots/GIFs?

- Do you like the colors?


For anyone who has played the game:

- How do you like the pace of the game?

- Do you think scoring is too easy?


Please feel free to only answer the questions you like. Any feedback is appreciated.

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Do you like or dislike the banner being a GIF?

Normally, I would dislike it but it looks neat here.

Is there too much text?

Yes. It is a very simple apple / leaf collecting game, so there is no need for a page-long description. The text that summarises the game should be at the top of the page.

Are there any information missing?

The plural of "leaf" is "leaves" not "leafs". I'm not sure whether this is intentional. Also, the bold / regular text is too jarring.

Would you like more screenshots/GIFs?

No, they are fine.

Do you like the colors?

It looks a bit too pale in my opinion. The apples could do with being more red and juicy.

my game-page does poorly in converting views to actual customers

It has a minimum price of $2 for what seems like a little project so this doesn't surprise me. Although, the game does look quite satisfying.

Thank you for your feedback. This is really helpful!

One question: Which price would you recommend? 0.99$, 1$, or maybe 1.49$ ?

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I'm not sure... It seems a bit too simple to be a paid game but you seem to be doing quite well already. Maybe $0.50.

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Thank you very much for your honest feedback.

You are right and I have to agree with you. I should just focus on my next project, a strategy game. Actually I did not find your words to be rude, but really inspirational. This is my first little game and it is absolutely nothing special. Still I am proud of having finished and released this game and it is an important stepping stone. Now I will move on and create something more unique.

Thanks again for taking the time to reply to my post and have a nice day!