Hello. It is me, The Unworthy Gurdy here willing to speak upon your game. When I played your game, I appreciated the intriguing elements of a revealing disturbing event tied to each character, forcing the protagonist to, at least acknowledge, the increasingly overwhelming reality in front of him, or choosing to live on life further, doing the most despicable act of all in this game. Unwilling to change. These story elements caught me off guard, as the intro to this game reminded me of another visual novel that starts out similar, but a slight role reversal, where you have to talk down a crazed man who has kidnapped you, and slowly unravel each other's past. This experience did not ease me into the unexpected turns of finding increasingly personal details about the people you are manipulating, and progressing onwards as your actions get further separated from sexual hypnosis romp to depressive episode. These themes combined made for some Hollow Feeling CGs. 
This is only one example out of many, if I had to suggest another I would have put the empty household in the couple dream sequence, of your protagonist simply looking in a clashed art style of 3D and 2D. It feels very disturbing, and I halfway expected it to go from horror game back to pornography. This is The Unworthy Gurdy's input, and I shall hide in the recesses of man.