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RuleBook for a card game, need review!

A topic by AKking_YT created Jun 24, 2023 Views: 171 Replies: 2

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I am working on a card game, I started it almost 2 years ago and I am getting ready for the release of it. I know its silly to of just now gotten around to this as its the most important part but here I am. :)

For some background of the card game I basically took the fighting from mtg and then the creature summoning from yu-gi-oh with some innovated rules to playing spells and artifact cards. The game's story is that a event called the Collision caused millions of universe to be thrown together causing mayhem and destruction, there are different card sets that come from different worlds each having a unique art style and or pallet.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1C9kgWFwSaHQ7CHSdoFax11oa80NPUJc6XhiC5Y5sFAU/...

That's the link to the document, If you could spare some of your time do you think that you could read through it and let me know what information needs to be expanded upon and also anything that I left out that a player might want/need to know!

Thank you!!

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AxalKay1 year ago

Wow! I thought the MLP TCG had a bad rule book. That is just horrible. I am not trying to be mean but, "The game lasts ten rounds. Or more." There are two abilities called wisdom. Your deck limit is as many cards as you can shuffle. You can't play if you have one hand can't shuffle the cards yourself. There are no examples of play. I don't get defending. I hope you had fun making this game. I have not seen a single card, but I am sure this game is just very bad.

Do you know who patch quest is? Patch quest made a video How Not To Make An Indie Game. I think you should watch it.

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AKking_YT1 year ago

Thank you for reviewing the rulebook! I've taken your feedback into consideration and have made changes accordingly!

I am unsure what your question about how the rounds are decided so if you could reiterate that would be greatly appreciated! I forgot the add the 2 to the second wisdom which has been revised. The deck limit has been changed to include the differently abled, instead of you yourself having to shuffle it the rule is that one person must be able to shuffle it themselves. I have yet to add examples of play but I am working on that right now! I added a section explaining attacking and defending along with a section that explained how the cards work!

I have seen patch quest! It is truly a inspiring story and its helped me to keep pressing forward no matter how many times I have to re-work or even restart my game projects.

Thank you for your feedback, if you have time I would love if you could go through it again and add more comments and suggestions!

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