Hello I am having trouble with the grammer and I cant seem to come up with an answer for it. I would like some help. I have listened to the hint for the first part but still don't know the problem. Also may I upload this to youtube. (I swear a lot)
There once was a big brown bear. He was walking through the woods. He saw an apple tree. He picked an apple from the tree and ate it. It tasted great. He picked two extra apples and took them home for dessert.