Hi,

I have read the booklet, and I really like the general idea of this rpg! I did notice a few possible mistakes in wording/formatting though, as I'm planning to make myself a physical copy of the booklet and get it bound I'm gonna "fix" those few details, I'd be happy to share my changes as suggestions for the rpg itself. 

(Tl;dr : Game Director, GM, and DJ are referring to the same person and are not consistent with each other & some formatting issues on the page 3 and wrong word on page 12)

I'd love to see more examples of 'items' in the booklet beside locksmith's tool kit mentioned on page 26, as only weapons and shields are explained in detail, perhaps things like ropes, healing items, etc, but that's just a random suggestion for future, probably most players would figure something out on their own.