Hello, I’m looking to improve my itch.io pages. What’s your first impression when you see my project pages?
Projects:
Does it make you want to download the game and play it? Does it lack a web version to try it? Or is it unclear? Sections missing? screenshots? …
I’m open to any feedback !!
Hazy Road:
Link color is hard to see. After reading the page and looking at the screenshots, I feel like I don't know what the game is really about. Maybe some more specific description of what you do in the game, or screenshot/video that makes it more obvious, would be helpful.
Ghost-Snap:
I like this page, very short and sweet, I would change the first sentence to say something other than "snapping" because some people might not understand that slang term especially if English isn't their first language. I would just put "game about photographing ghosts", or at least "snapping pictures".
Marble:
This one also looks pretty good and has the most information. But I would be less likely to download this because it seems to be just a toy rather than a game? If you could build your own course that would change everything :P
I looked at the 3 pages. With hazy-road it isn't quite clear what kind puzzles there are to solve exactly. Also I find the green on the trees too intense, this isn't natural in a dark environment.
The ghost-snap page I liked better, with the description and the screenshots, I get an idea what to do and it sounds fun. I would download the game - the only reason I don't, is that I fear I will take too much of my time.
The marble page is also ok but from the description I fear there isn't much to do for the player. I wouldn't download it.
