• What do you think of the itch.io page?

It was decently designed. I liked all the pictures you included. The text was a little hard to see though, maybe give them a slightly darker background to fall on, while leaving the far left and right as it. I think the design of the background fits the theme you're going for perfectly.

Also, it's always a good idea to try to get a GIF thumbnail for your game icon.

• How do you feel the developer feels (beginner or professional, intermediate and so on)?

Definitely not a beginner vibe, I think intermediate for this platform. Your store page is leagues ahead of any of mine. . .

My general thoughts ( as a player )

I was going to download but I decided not to because of the warning you posted in the description ( about virus ). Even if it's just a part of the story / a game mechanic it still might alarm other players. 

I was also a little confused about the premise.  I assumed at first, the game would take a "haunted education" route ( Baldie-like ), but then I read about a marriage?, and then mention of a virus? ( Doki Doki Literature Club - like )?  These genres/troupes work well independently , but I have yet to see someone pull them off all together.  I would recommend master each genre individually then trying to talk them altogether.

I will definitely follow you, since I think you have a lot of potential if you keep at it. I

I want to see you make the next "Baldie" or "Amanda the Adventurer"!