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Awesome Writing

A topic by demwesker created 11 days ago Views: 84 Replies: 2
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I have managed to beat the game in both normal and slut mode. I am just writing here to applaud the writing of this game, and 4 of the scenes that stood out to me. I interacted with the game in a self-inserting way so you'll understand where I am coming from as I write them here.

1) The porno scene is amazing. The emotions and fear that goes through the bunny after watching his own clips were amazing, the fourth wall breaking comments were very creative.

2) The nasty posters outside the club after his second service in the club is amazing. I actually felt the embarassment that the bunny had and was desperate to remove them myself (on the first encounter of this scene).

3) Having to talk to everyone in the club before the third service in the club was also very embarassing. Having to invite them in his normal state of mind was difficult and degrading to the ego even to me.

4) The most impactful scene is losing to Khazeem in slut mode. (Avoiding spoilers) I was hurt to see them getting dragged into the mess unwillingly out of their kindness and concern. Plus, knowing they may get a more wholesome future role with the bunny makes it hurt even more. I couldn't watch the scene twice. 

Everything else was just sweet sweet icing for me, but the way you presented the consequences of being a mindless slut hits close to home and very impactful. 

All in all, you know the formula very well, so keep doing what you're doing now. I look forward to your next chapter. :)

Developer(+1)

Thanks! To be fair, you got to enjoy the game in the optimal way: coming it at the end when ALL the content is finished, polished and bug tested. You got gangbanged by content, in the best possible way. But that content still has to work, and I'm glad to hear it did!

Ha, and I'm glad you enjoyed the poster scene, since that was a fairly simple add: no real new art, just fiddling with formatting a little. But I wanted to flesh out the BJ path so it wasn't just: go to club, BJ three times in a row. 

I regret to inform you this is not the last time "horrible" things will happen to Scratch though. But also nice things may happen, some of them this next chapter (though not on first release)! As always, it will be the player's fault either way. But yeah, that last Khazeem one is a fun one isn't it?

Its amazing how much a simple add like that poster scene could do really. I appreciate that a lot!

And yeah Khazeem was fun! I took couple tries on his standard fight because I forgot I had the cologne. His slut mode fight though took many tries xD I am still trying to make sense if its rng or there is a sequence. The ending is good yeah, well crafted ^^  it played with my emotions a lot so I loved it :D