Kudos for the stunning production values of this first installment. It was like watching an indy film set in a kind of brooding minor key, starting from the falling-leaf animation in the main-menu screen. 

You've successfully kept it "genuine, understated, and believable," as you commented to that other player. You navigate the tone(s) with purposeful nuance. And you demonstrate a skillful grasp of whatever is the AVN equivalent of cinematography or camerawork, like that shot at the bus stop of the fly in the spider's web with the background out of focus.

Your handling of interpersonal communication has particularly been pretty masterful. Not only does the dialogue ring true, but you seem to understand that around 70% of human communication is nonverbal. This includes stuff like amusing facial expressions, significant pauses in conversations, and an array of postures and gestures. 

As you move forward, OtterFly, please take care of yourself. Stay hydrated, eat good food, and get plenty of rest. I'll be keenly bummed if you run out of gumption before this project reaches completion!