Hope this is some sort of comment section.

Cuz I REALLY want to bash the MC over the head. Repeatedly.
What kind of moron sacrifice themselves?! >_<

I TRULY wish there was a REAL CHOICE!
Cuz the mc is clearly nothing at all like me, and I really hate playing do-gooders.
....clearly she deserves everything she gets. >_>

The idea for the game is very good.
I LOVE the villain.

And the buildup to the game hints of some amazing and fun game.
(Where you get to kill people. ^_^
....and I admit I held a teeny-tiny hope you could romance the villain. But I realize that may be too much to hope for.)

But the ending SUCKS!

And the entire game is boring, more boring, and even more boring, and wait! It ends!
(By which I mean: introductions and then you die. And no, you can't choose to say no to being an idiot.)

I have no clue if any interaction with other characters impact that choice, but even if they do, it's stupid.
You want to play nice with people so they don't kill you, obviously.
But that doesn't mean you care for them one whit. It's purely strategic.

I REALLY wish there was a choice! >_<

Hi Raven! Thank you so much for playing through my Demo! Sorry that your experience with it wasn’t that good. To help me, what’s boring about it? Is it because it doesn’t get into the nitty gritty straight away, or did you just not enjoy that part?

Also about the villain, I’m glad you like him! I’ve had heaps of others saying they like him too! So atleast I’m pretty proud of myself for creating a good villain. The lore with the villain and the protag goes deeper than just the game itself, but there won’t be much romance between them because obviously, Ciara hates him because he is not a good person. But there is small amounts of romance between them mostly sided to Akira.

Sorry you don’t like the ending, remember it’s just the Demo. And it’s in really early stages. I just wanted to make Ciara be the one I to get stabbed because if there were other choices it would make a lot of work for me. Or maybe I will just get rid of the whole thing, idk?

im currently up to writing and creating a part where they are in the first killing game and someone’s gonna die soon (it’s basically a card killing game where people hav various roles) so yeah, there’s a lot more to add!

thank you very much for your honest review though, I really appreciate it!! Have a lovely day!