I absolutely LOVE this. Thanks so much for sharing!!!!
A couple things: There seem to be a few typos.
"I have a strong feeling that my sister is not a country..."
regarding hair color: "Yet, my reflex in the water proves me wrong."
Not sure if it's a translation thing (the rest seems to be in excellent English), but if you have any questions I'm happy to proof-read.
that was whole 6 pages? i saw 1 chapter and quickread it once. i personaly was not a fan of this and protagonist starting point annoyed me over all the limits, but i upvoted whole topic and had highter expectations, maybe he is just writting next chapter and doing it line by line and google docs autosaving all progress he dont want you to see before finish?
