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Alright, so I played the game, and despite your art style not exactly being my cup of tea (I'm not really for hyper-bara, but you actually did pretty good on this and the art rubbed off on me. The only one that was a bit much for me was Janus) it was actually pretty good. The story actually got me hooked, and I can't wait for updates~ oh! and the few CGs seem a bit off from the character sprites, and I really like the charecter sprites!
Thanks for playing the game, we'll likely see the art end evolve over time (I practice everyday). Hyper-bara is not always my mission, when I draw I tend to draw large (blames his high school teacher), at this time none of the assets, sprites/bg/sfx, are safe from being replaced as the development process continues. I'm very happy to hear that the story end is what you like the most. Thanks again dragonboy888! =3
im not gonna lie i really enjoyed the writing and character/world building but it feels as if the story doesn't know what it wants to be.A action adventure a romance or a thriller.But i enjoyed alot of it you clearly know your characters and for that i applaud almost nobody can write characters that feel human.is it just you working on the game or a team? Because its rather good eather way!
Thank you kindly cmim2507. I'm glad that you enjoy the characters, and the evolving story. I'm really happy with the latest work, about 90% of all the work is my doing. I have reliable bug testers now, as well as my friends who know what to do when coding errors arise to help me along the way. Please check back often for more updates =3
I was playing throw the janus thread when a problem occurred when Jenny tried to read her mails.
Followingthe crash report.
I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.
While running game code:
File "game/Jenny1.rpy", line 175, in script
Exception: String u'[We must have really impressed him, who knew data collection could take us so far? You have me to thank for keeping us organized and running efficiently.-' ends with an open format operation.
-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------
Full traceback:
File "game/Jenny1.rpy", line 175, in script
File "D:\wolfstar_sins_and_paradise-1.0-pc\renpy\ast.py", line 613, in execute
renpy.exports.say(who, what, interact=self.interact)
File "D:\wolfstar_sins_and_paradise-1.0-pc\renpy\exports.py", line 1142, in say
who(what, interact=interact)
File "D:\wolfstar_sins_and_paradise-1.0-pc\renpy\character.py", line 867, in __call__
what = what_pattern.replace("[what]", sub(what, translate=translate))
File "D:\wolfstar_sins_and_paradise-1.0-pc\renpy\character.py", line 849, in sub
return renpy.substitutions.substitute(s, scope=scope, force=force, translate=translate)[0]
File "D:\wolfstar_sins_and_paradise-1.0-pc\renpy\substitutions.py", line 232, in substitute
s = formatter.vformat(s, (), kwargs)
File "/home/tom/ab/x64lucid-deps/install/lib/python2.7/string.py", line 563, in vformat
File "/home/tom/ab/x64lucid-deps/install/lib/python2.7/string.py", line 572, in _vformat
File "D:\wolfstar_sins_and_paradise-1.0-pc\renpy\substitutions.py", line 157, in parse
raise Exception("String {0!r} ends with an open format operation.".format(s))
Exception: String u'[We must have really impressed him, who knew data collection could take us so far? You have me to thank for keeping us organized and running efficiently.-' ends with an open format operation.
Windows-8-6.2.9200
Ren'Py 6.99.12.2.2029
wolfstar_sins_and_paradise 1.0
Howlies Alessan. Thank you for the bug report, I greatly appreciate it. For this error we had a stray bracket marker that is causing the error. I'm trying my best to remove brackets from my writing style, because they cause errors in renpy, looks like I missed another one. Rest assured that this will be removed in time for the next itchio build. An update is coming soon. Thanks again! =3
Game not bad after all, I dislike this kind of art but it grew in me a little(Pretty much a lot). Some part of there were funny, story is great, music is good, character is hot, romance me like very much, what I rate this? 4/5
Music: 3/5
Story: 4/5
romance: 4/5
Character: NA (To hot for this)
I only tried the demo not the game yet. I was hoping for Hugo at the demo as well(LOL), but it still great so far. Keep up the good work! Good Luck and Have Fun(At work huehuehue).
One last thing, there more story then the demo right? Like full version, but still updating.
Thank you kindly IPlayAllDay. I'm happy with the scores thus far, and even more excited that you came back to try out the game again. I hope to keep up with the improvements all around, and will definitely add more content for date choices/ scenes. Hugo's route is the first on my list to work on currently, which will be the main focus on the Patreon build. Thanks again for the review =3
Howlies AxlWolfang!
I have a feeling I know which character's text that could be. I'll try out some text colors and have a change ready for the next update. Thanks so much for playing the game dude! I can't wait to post more. Itchio should be getting a new update before January if everything continues to go smoothly =3
Howlies Shin,
Thank you so much for playing the original game before, and for giving the recent demo a playthrough as well. Your comment has made me so utterly pleased, I'm so glad to know that things have changed so much since rolling out the first chapter. I can't thank you enough for coming back for another trial, I hope to crank out a lot more content, and not become shit down the road. Thank you again Shin, there will be more to come soon =3
must say love ya game!!! My favorite alongside Blackgate and Extracurricular Activities <3
I got a question did you sacrificing a bit of the quality of the art in the game to get more progress done on the story? Because that seems efficient! By sacrificing a bit of quality to get more quantity for now and then improving the quality when it’s finished!
If not it’s good either way.
I was a bit surprised you decided to make hyper a semi-antagonist, his part of the story wouldn’t so happen to be related to wolfstar’s dreeaaam is it? a bit foreshadowing. ;)
Oh and also I like you made Cornelius either gay or bi because... the community isn’t so well... “favored” by allot of the Christian populace so making an angel rooting for the rainbows was an interesting writers choice!!
Overall can’t wait for the next build!!! (Unfortunately can’t donate to your patreon would if I could)
Thanks for playing the demo Quane 101, I'm grateful for the feedback too.
Art assets that are currently used in the game are not safe from future alteration/ updating/ removal from the final game.
I'm hoping to hire on some artists down the road, but for now, all the work is up to yours truly x3
Hyper's antagonist ways were definitely foreshadowed in the dream maze sequence, very good observation dude!
Cornelius the angel rooting for rainbows has now become my new favorite set of words.
I can relate with not being able to throw money at your favorite artist. If you can spread the word that this game exists though, that would be an awesome way to support us. The more people who see it, the better!
Thank you again, and a new itchio update is scheduled to be released before this month ends.
well after I was done restarting and played the update all I can say is a mix of hmm..., ha! and damn!!!
Eh heheh wolfstar literally sleeps with the enemy, his mortal enemy !!! That must’ve the ultimate angry sex!! Where was Cornelius through all this ;)
Does that means wolfstar going to the church was just a dream...lol :)
I like your design of curiosity/lust vs ethics/morals, how this effects that in the long and short run.
Haaah...I absolutely can not wait to see how this happened. I will be waiting patiently for the next update <3
What better way to wake up in the morning than with your worst enemy, that'll get you out of bed fast!
I'd love to answer all of your questions hopefully by the next update, especially in regards to Cornelius. It makes me so happy to hear that you're enjoying the game with all of the craziness that has been happening.
Next itchio soft update coming at the end of this month.
I imagine it would go down like this https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=JTC1yLfKA2o skip to 00:40
newest update is very dairyliscious! (bad cow puns :p)
Anymoo this build got allot of suspense.(I like suspense) from the weird zebra and shadow guy, the nightmare of wolfstars inner demon rage, to hyper, I mean fury attacking Rufus (to bad I liked him good boy for defending wolfstar).
What’s going to happen next build? Lemme guess!
Do wolfstar might have to kill someone? Is someone else going to intervene? Is he going to use the “beta wolf” to lead him to the “alpha”?
Howlies Shin!
I'm excited to see that you're enjoying the story thus far. There is definitely going to be a Dagio route in the game, (thanks to our Patreon voters we will get to go out with him soon [in chapter 4]). I'll do my best to keep the bad stuff and spelling mistakes as non existent as possible. As for a Cornelius route....well....It's possible =3
enjoyed the update! <3 glad to see you back.
Why people want Dagio as a date option, beyond me. cant say that i liked it though. i give his character points for honesty(maybe) even for a demon. its obvious who put that tat where and who can guess why... or not. :p. my only question is why didn't wolfstar ask dagio how he died, probably to mad and confused.
so the guard dogs double as attack hounds. hope the poor girls alright.
i wonder who that shifty broken elf's allegiance truly lies... probably to himself.(sorta respect that)
cant wait till next update
Howlies Quane101,
In the strange case of fan love for Dagio, I'm going to chalk it all up to "evil is sexy". He won the poll for the next date scene, so we will likely get more information in Chapter 4. Jenny and Dexter have their hands full, trapped in a building full of BFP guards. "Shifty broken elf", that's a really good description of his character (I may need to use that sometime in the game lol). I can't wait to see what happens next >.<!!!
nice update as usual,
if Rufus does turn full beast i hope he still retains most of his normal form (cutie)
Fury(hyper) seems to be cracking, tell me is the "true friend reminding you who you are" trope cliche because i'm fine with it.
so that's where rainbow angel been and the pimp bear may lose his kingdom who'll take his throne, i got a few ideas.
Howlies Shin, sorry if I missed your message on Twitter. I keep forgetting to check the requested messages because no one else does that (stupid Twitter). New version numbers have been implemented as of the latest updates. We're on version 3 now--I'm using a different form of renpy then my mate Dyne, so we have a harder time getting things like version updates out. I felt really foolish when we discovered where the version number code was hiding too x3
As far as the content logs go, we'll be more specific as Chapter 4 brings about our main branching pathways. Finally the power of choice will be in the capable paws of the player as to where they'd like the story to go. We'll be sure to mention which of the six main routes (Alex, Janus, Hugo, Rufus, and Dagio) are getting updated.
As for skipping chapters, hopefully with the new techniques we've been working with, players will no longer have to start over their saves from the beginning anymore. New variables can be made and still be able to avoid this scenario.
Thank you for playing the game, and for commenting. Stay tuned for more =3
great update as usual wolf!
i hope the angel's alright maybe if they're badly injured they retreat to heaven? I always figured the "darker grey" souls go to paradise instead of the "other place". looks like the demons tattoo turned out in our favor. only thing that very surprised me was how fury was so willing to submit himself to star, obviously lying(or was he? ) hope hypey won't be in jail for to long.
glad your becoming popular! with any luck you'll one day be as famous as DyneWulf.
alright we’ll i just finished the newest update today and all in all I’m completely satisfied with how things turned out in the end I think this is a really good game and the writing is really well done as well as the character designs as well I think it’s pretty cool how the characters blink as well as move too I’m just wondering what’s going to happen in the next chapter when a new update comes out eventually can’t wait to find out and who knows maybe eventually we’ll get down to the sexy parts with each of the sexy dateable characters that Wolfstar has to choose from keep up the great work and I’ll be sure to stay tuned when a new update comes out hope that’ll be sometime soon but no rush
Damn Man this Game is Great! Can't Wait till the Next Update Comes out. Gotta say props to you man for working on this Game for a Long time! The amount of story for a dating Game wasn't Bad. Great Story line, Amazing Graphics and Great Game Style too. Keep Doin what you do and Congrats on this amount of Success
Sincerely,
Mr. Kaos
P.S. I love the amount of Magic in here. Always loved that.
Good (insert appropriate time of day) to you, Stah. I'm curious how far apart you intend on spacing future updates. I wholly understand and respect that development of this game isn't what consumes your every day. That means the content is better overall. But I'm scared as all hell that the story may end up like Hugo wants his dancers to be. Unobtainable.
(I should be able to support you on Patreon, soon, given a few more weeks.)
Howlies KilikOdagawa,
I really like how you start off your message, my waking hours tend to begin in the afternoon. The way I plan on spacing future updates, well, we are going to focus on one route at a time currently. Hugo won the last Patreon vote, so we will get a week of Hugo first. We're about to experience a much faster pace as power is handed over to the player to navigate what Wolfstar does throughout the week. You may still have the unobtainable status should you make certain choices during the week.
Thank you for wanting to support me too. I really appreciate it x3