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A jam submission

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A short interactive story created for the Bruised Egos Game Jam
Submitted by ludeshka — 3 hours, 59 minutes before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Character investment#202.8223.353
Actually a fun game#212.0302.412
Sticking to the rules#212.8713.412
Overall#212.5743.059

Ranked from 17 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

STARRING:
Alexandria

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Comments

Submitted

It's cool that you manage to put such a clear image in my head from your writing. Nice story, high character investment.

Submitted

This was beautifully written. I'm very glad that you decided to upload the fixed version.

Developer(+1)

Thank you so much! You were all very kind to me,  so in the end I did upload the correct version instead of deleting and running away,  which was my first instinct!  This has been a learning experience for sure.  But I had fun!  I will participate in more jams after this one!! 

Submitted

The writing is very expressive, you really paint a vivid picture.

Developer

Thank you so much!!  I tried!  I mean I don't know how fun I could make it but I tried hard to make the reader care for Alexandria.  I loved her character concept for the jam so I wanted to write her a cool origin story.