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Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
Innovation | #1 | 4.200 | 4.200 |
Time Before Deadline | #2 | 4.000 | 4.000 |
Theme | #4 | 4.200 | 4.200 |
Overall | #4 | 3.400 | 3.400 |
Over and Above | #5 | 2.400 | 2.400 |
Catchiness | #6 | 3.200 | 3.200 |
Quality | #8 | 2.000 | 2.000 |
Ranked from 5 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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- I really like how you took the theme, I know you are having a few issues with equipment right now, so I'm not going to tank your quality just because you don't have access to better microphones. I do really love what you went for here
How many people helped with this project?
I made it myself
Streaming Service?
SoundCloud https://on.soundcloud.com/PV1oi
Would you like to say what this song means to you?
I wanted to add some elements from both South Africa's amapiano genre and its house music
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Comments
really really like the song and your vocals especially are really good, really fits the theme too.
but I would echo what gullo said, in that the lower notes on the piano in particular feel like they're maybe clipping or being pushed too hard into some kind of saturation/distortion that gives it a bit of an unpleasant sound so I'd recommend just being a bit more careful with your volume levels!
still very much enjoy the song though!
Vocals!!!!!! it is a breath of fresh air to listen to vocals and live recordings. Love the lyrics, the use of real instruments. Thank you for this, im sure this took a lot of effort.
-"I am a wave" thats powerful, had to listen a few times just for the poetry.
I think it's a unique and ambitious approach.
The rapping is really nice, and placing it on a piano-only track gives a pretty intimate feel to it. Regarding the mix, I think the track is clipping a lot, which sounds a bit off
thank you, u really appreciate that and I'll start considering my mixing alot more