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A jam submission

Operation: Iron LungView project page

A 2-page FIST one-shot about a submarine filled with blood
Submitted by ShadowAspect — 5 days, 15 hours before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
SUBSTANCE#133.9173.917
Overall#153.5003.500
STYLE#183.0833.083

Ranked from 12 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

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Comments

Submitted(+1)

Short and easy to ready, the submarine map does a great job of conveying setting while being a very functional navigational aid. Love the setting and the rising blood mechanic is a really clever way to increase tension and make things more desperate as the scenario proceeds. While it could use a bit more visual flair, it's a testament to the writing and mechanics that it manages to be so evocative with a relatively sparse layout.

Submitted(+1)

Short, sweet, simple, effective, creative!
Although I'd like to see a longer and more fleshed out version, this is great!

Submitted(+1)

A short and concise mission. Love the use of the flooding submarine trope with a cult-injected twist. The use of blood is evocative and I love the idea that the more you kill cultists the more it floods. I'd love to see a version of this mission that's maybe page longer with a tracking tool or chart for referees to keep track of the blood level on the submarine easier and maybe some key art thrown in but as it stands I think this is a great example of how a FIST mission should be written.

Developer(+1)

Really useful feedback, thank you!

I agree that it could be longer, and a lot prettier. I wanted to do room descriptions and more GM guidance but ran out of time. Hopefully I can make a more finished version in the new year :)