Piranesian slum is a FIST op with punchy design and a strong 'zone' vibes.

Style: 

• The flow-chart map gives the adventure a strong visual structure and grounds it's twisting layout for the referee
• The palette and clear layout fits the F.I.S.T. aesthetic but adds a dash of colour and its own spin, it feels fresh
• The art / diagrams are rad and feel purposeful

Content:

• Each location is packed with description to support referees
• The clear setting, (body-horror themed) altered locations, suggested music and written-flavour create a cohesive unwelcoming and eerie location
• The hook of being the support team while things go wrong for the A team is neat, and builds on the dangerous zone that you reluctantly have to enter
• There are some bigger swings - use of non-D6, interesting enemy traits and weapon effects

What might I change? 

• An editing and proof-read pass could have tightened up the content
• I wonder if a 'what is happening' section for the referee would give a helpful overview of the scenario before diving into the detail (I was still a little unclear about what the entity was after reading)

An eerie traversal of a warped slum

After reading this seems like a fun and strange mission. Dangerous masses and looping slums all caused by a demon? It has a nice flow chart that dictates the flow of the mission that seems easy to follow.

FIST GMAE JAM V scores

STYLE: 5/5, This felt like a true forbidden zone with high peril. For me it was very reminiscent of SCP-184 and Gordon Richards' logs of their dispatch to the Kowloon Walled City which is cool.

SUBSTANCE: 3/5, Well presented but unfortunately has a few typos and grammatical errors.