An eerie traversal of a warped slum
After reading this seems like a fun and strange mission. Dangerous masses and looping slums all caused by a demon? It has a nice flow chart that dictates the flow of the mission that seems easy to follow.
FIST GMAE JAM V scores
STYLE: 5/5, This felt like a true forbidden zone with high peril. For me it was very reminiscent of SCP-184 and Gordon Richards' logs of their dispatch to the Kowloon Walled City which is cool.
SUBSTANCE: 3/5, Well presented but unfortunately has a few typos and grammatical errors.