I'm in love with Athol, but now I feel bad for ditching my bud Rowan :(

Seems like a nice start! Characters seem good, though I'd love some background art. The music was well done, fit each character nicely, especially Athol. A bit abrupt going between them so quickly, though that abruptness did make me laugh when finding out Clawdious was still in the room.

I like your style :) I had problem with music changing so much and so often, it was annoying. 
And i didn't catch the "Out of control" part :( I liked it tho

I fail to grasp the uncontrollably  of the game. As an artist i cannot say the art is amazing I can see there was some thought into the characters (they aren't generic), but the game is too short (even on multiple play-thoughts) to get a proper understanding of the characters motives and personality.

Music could do with a transition between different tracks.

The background... well there isn't one. I'd recommend a background that would describe the situation.

I rated the game with poor ratings as i don't see any connection to the Game jam nor do I feel the game achieved anything unique. As for the presentation, well the art isn't anything spectacular as I mentioned before and the game concept is easy to grasp as it is not an intricate thing to play.

Keep up the work and improve with each game.

Really, really solid. I love the artwork, though visual novels def aren't my thing, I 100 percent respect the insane amount of work that probally went into making the music, art and text. 

Oh, a visual novel. Well, this was unexpected. :D Well done!

Like holy crap! How much work!

I am really impressed, for real!

Like how much time have you guys like spent to grind on the dialogues? Holy

The art is like insane, really can't say more about it. The music is also really nice. Gives really the correct vibe to the corresponding person!

Well done :D

would be thankful if you could check out my game as well, no needs tho :p