Pretty fun, and lots of potential with the concept. The intro and "cutscenes" were immersive for the Jam. The movement is the interesting part to me; it sounds odd on paper that left click controls jump and fire, but it worked great and I enjoyed the dashing + the longer jumps. The blue teleport surfaces are great fun too but they did seem to be slightly disorienting, requiring more attempts to succeed; perhaps having some way to have more time to see where to go can help. All together I enjoyed the platforming, I'd play more like this.

That's a really good idea, and with enough polishing  it can truly become special!

It adheres to the theme, but sometimes the transition from dash (Which it honestly is better off being called a "sprint") isn't seamless for the reloading and the teleporters disorient you sometimes. only being able to shoot after jumping is perfect, but maybe the reload system and the shot knockback system needs some fine tuning.

What I absolutely adored was the story - as light as it was. The ending was pretty damn great, honestly. Some... spell check errors here and there, but nothing too irritating. I felt like I had fucked up in the beggining of the game, with the <ERROR> spawning, but that just immersed me more!

The blatant flaw, however, despite obviously the aesthethics, is the level design. The levels are... not that thought out, at all. It's clear they were an afterthought, and, with a game so based around movementation and, well, FLOW (hehe), can't blame ya for letting those two be afterthoughts. Definetly hurts your game a bit.

Improve the game feel a bit, obviously the level design, some bug squashing (I found one where if I do the portal trick where I keep shooting forwards on that "wall jump" session, I get spitted out into the void!) and, also obviously, the aesthethics, and honestly it'd be a great game by itself - it's already very innovative!

I think the atmosphere is great. The movement feels pretty good, but unfortunately, I think you've bound too much to two buttons. I don't really see a reason that the shooting mechanic should be bound to the same button as shooting or that shooting really even needs to be a mechanic in the game. I think you could just as easily accomplish what you've done by adding a double jump and making the warp pads something that you run into.  The way it's currently set up, it's also fairly disorienting to move through the pads. I think if you added some indication of where a warp pad would lead you/which way you'll be facing as you come out of it, it would help a lot.