I really like the first minute 50 seconds ish, but the synth strings are much too quiet in my opinion. The crunchy drums sound awesome. I like that short bit at the end a lot too! It just should maybe go in another track? I think these ideas would work better if you made 3 songs instead of only one.

For the whole first 70% of the song the drums were so loud it was really hard to hear anything else, but after that the short guitar and 808 drums section sounded nice!

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