This took me a few turns to get into because I felt like it wasn't clearly established, so I thought it was going to be something different than what it turned out to be. I really liked it in the end. The choices and their effects felt rational and interesting, and the narration had character to it.

Fun story that almost feels like an allegory. I liked that we could go back to specific fail points rather than start over! I also stumbled with the "smallcaps" font for a brief minute but adapted to it. I can imagine the story being expanded with more side adventures, encountered strangers, and stopgaps as puzzles, but as is very satisfying!

Font was a bit hard to read, but I read it anyways because the fable was compelling. And I was in it.

Original idea that turns into a puzzle about how to save the house.  Great fun!

Original idea that turns into a puzzle about how to save the house.  Great fun!

A great story that builds to cool conclusion

Damm that was a fun story. 

I got more and more invested in the zany story as it went on. Really fun tale