The story is something that was the main focus in the game, and this made me feel somewhat frustrated with not knowing what happened after the flower was found. I felt that there was a lot to be told (based on the others scenes to come), but there was not enough time to do so. In this case, an ending drawing would be more than enough to finish the experience and wrap the great story created.

The lock picking is an interesting feature that could be more explored, one option would be having the code hidden in a drawer, a letter or even in the painting on the wall, those types of puzzles are fun to solve and add more depth to the gameplay.

I agree with squid.mid's comment with the player walk speed, having a way to switch between walk and sprint would solve this, so you can have more movement control when trying to reach certain objects.

The art is truly beautiful, we can see the sprites and every place created has love in it, great job!

Neat game! Here are my notes:

• I love the art, both in the cutscene and the game!
• The player walk speed feels very fast, almost to the point of being hard to control.
• The lock picking section seems to be bugged: the code above the door says 1342, but the correct order was 1423.
• I'm not sure about the connection to eyes as a special object. I noted the floating eye next to the player, but I didn't have any idea what that was or how it was important. I see here that it's meant to be the heroine's companion, but that wasn't clear at all within the game itself.
• Music and sound effects were lovely, very fitting.
• I noted that some of the text was in Russian, and it sounds like the developer isn't a native English speaker. I'm happy to overlook some of the grammatical errors, but there were a few cases where the text only appeared in Russian without its English translation, which was a little confusing.

Very nice, if a little short. I love the story aspect, and would be very glad to see an extended version!