Wonderfully illustrated and edited.  There seemed to be a considerable amount of care into the segments flowing into each one another...  with a rhythm in mind! So when I got to the part with the glitched blue screens fading in and out and the words being told in the illustration rather than the dialogue box, it really had good impact!
Bravo on the colors and fine lined illustrations. (especially that cool perspective drawing of hands holding a broom!!!)  

Story was a bit hard to understand, but I thoroughly enjoyed it mostly in a good abstract kinda way, and from a 'vibe' and art perspective.  

-FishChiesa | artist | Box of Mushrooms

Nice work! I may have to play it through again, as it feels like I may have missed something. But I liked interacting with the objects and letting that bring the narrative into focus.

A great experience! The attention to detail and use of repeated imagery really sells the emotional core of the narrative. Interactivity isn't exactly commonplace in Ren'py games, so to see you use it to expand the story and the characters involved, even if by a small amount, is a welcoming breath of fresh air. The art's top notch as well. 

Lack of sound aside (trust me, I understand how daunting it is to find and implement sound and music when you have all this other stuff to do as a solo developer), the bird is, sadly, very distracting, and hurts the somber tone of the narrative. Not to a serious degree, though. Also, it might just be me, but I found Cole's father's motivations to be somewhat unclear, even after a second playthrough. Perhaps it's meant to be left for interpretation, but I found most of the other threads to be clear. 

Keep up the good work!

(Side note: I commend the subtle hinting in the title and main menu art)