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| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Horniness | #7 | 3.889 | 3.889 |
| Theme | #9 | 2.778 | 2.778 |
| Uniqueness | #11 | 2.778 | 2.778 |
| Gameplay | #11 | 2.111 | 2.111 |
| Overall | #11 | 2.889 | 2.889 |
Ranked from 9 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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Fun writing, a solid little VN. I really like that design for Toriel.
In the “explore the underground” part, it’s too easy to wind up getting the same encounter over and over. I gave up after seeing whimsum 3 times in a row and never encountered the froggit from the screenshots.
Yeah, I didn't have enough time to fully balance or implement all the exploration scenes. there's only 7 and torial's home was set as a higher priority meaning your likely to get that one a few times too. when I do an update I'll be sure to balance it better and include a lot more scenes. Not sure how you got whimsum that many times lol.
Glad you enjoyed Tori. I had to think a lot about exactly how I wanted to portray her XD
I'll go out on a limb and say I do enjoy VNs, I love seeing a story unfold! * 7* That being said, I have never played Undertale and this was my first interaction with the series as a whole, so congratulations for giving me my first impressions on the characters, lol!
Fun, with some bits of lore behind the horny!
Writing and art were fun.
It's a pretty standard VN so not really much to say.
As a big fan of Ren'Py and Undertale, I can say:
1. I have an irreparable trauma, and I will never look at Toriel the same way again.
2. You've done an outstanding job (I know making games with Ren'Py can be more laborious than it seems).
3. The drawings are incredibly cute.
I can see you're big fans of Undertale, and I hope you continue with the project because it seems like you enjoy it. Good luck on your journey in game dev!
Thank you. I haven't released any fanfiction visual novels yet, so I was really nervous my art wasn't quite up to stuff for it. XD
I do want to continue the project, still trying to figure out the music situation but for now I have stuff that functions.
also thanks to everyone for commenting playing, it means a lot to hear. XD
I Love the illustrations and the concept!
Nice short VN with sexy monster girl !
really need to
Not a fan of vn's, but definatly pretty good demo ;)
I guess I should really get around to play undertale....
Fun demo btw :D
Not a huge fan of VNs, but the art style looked cute! Cool game!