This is an extremely robust idea for a game. And for a first-time creation you did a bang-up job of including aesthetics (love the Neapolitan ice cream colors, which contrast nicely with the theme in a way that enhances it) and a great setting. The play mechanics seem solid enough for the group to work out any questions. You should be very proud!
Something to note - I'd increase the size of the font on the game page. It's VERY small which won't be easily accessible for those with vision issues. Also, those casually browsing pages are less likely to read a description that requires more than normal effort. So you'd do a long-term boon for your game's viability. Although you may have made it small to avoid itch.io's odd habit of placing an addition "buy now" at the top of the page?
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The art here is incredible. I want Barb'ra to be my friend.
Very cool idea with a lot of fertile (heh) ground to play a few games in... the abilities give players a lot of options, well done!
This is an extremely robust idea for a game. And for a first-time creation you did a bang-up job of including aesthetics (love the Neapolitan ice cream colors, which contrast nicely with the theme in a way that enhances it) and a great setting. The play mechanics seem solid enough for the group to work out any questions. You should be very proud!
Something to note - I'd increase the size of the font on the game page. It's VERY small which won't be easily accessible for those with vision issues. Also, those casually browsing pages are less likely to read a description that requires more than normal effort. So you'd do a long-term boon for your game's viability. Although you may have made it small to avoid itch.io's odd habit of placing an addition "buy now" at the top of the page?
This amazing! I've been wanting something like this, amazing work.
Amazing rpg, loved the flavor, the art and the scenario.
Thanks so much! It's my first ever game so very happy to hear critical feedback too, I've much to learn!
I love your forgetful bards game, such a fun idea!