Lol If you're going to take inspiration from classic literature, the Bible isn't the worst source ever. Good stuff!

You’ve done a fantastic job of creating a compelling and immersive story! The dynamic between Novis and Elara, especially with the twist at the end, really pulled me in. I love how you managed to blend the scientific and the divine in a way that feels natural to the setting. Keep up the great work—I’m excited to see more of your writing in the future!

Very interesting that this was essentially a reimagined version of the Bible story. Well written and great ending!