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A Rouge Dwarf in Queen Piper's Court's itch.io pageResults
| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Concepts & Originality | #11 | 4.000 | 4.000 |
| Flow & Clarity | #23 | 3.417 | 3.417 |
| Overall | #27 | 3.389 | 3.389 |
| Adherence to Theme | #45 | 2.750 | 2.750 |
Ranked from 24 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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Flowed nicely, solid ending liked the callback to the Father's words.
"And let me tell you, there’s no bond stronger than a lie needs takes two lips. " this was very nicely written
Holy crap, 10/10 as far as story and writting are concerned. Do you write often? This is my 5th story reviewing, and it is by far the most well written. Loved the ending too.
Thanks! I really enjoyed the last jam, my first one, so I started writing more. Thanks for the compliment!
A good entry with a good story behind it. I spotted one typo but it didn't take away from the story itself. One thing though, I think it's a bit of a stretch in terms of adherence to the theme, but you score high for the story.
Well done!
I'm still working on how to deliver themes subtly but meaningfully. I hated how on the nose my last entry was so I may have over compensated here. Thanks for the feedback!
I didn’t know a hammer could be used as a time travel device. LOL. I absolutely loved your writing style and the way that you wrote the dwarfs voice. I struggled a little differentiating between queen piper and master knight mir but I was reading quickly. You fit a lot in 1000 words and did it very well. Loved how it looked around at the end and tied up the time travel question.