The ending was a perfect encapsulation of the principle that an enlisted troop will find absolutely anything to grumble about.

I liked the use of the OPR factions for defining characters.

Was that an artistic retelling of an operating room at the VA? ;) I like the premise. There was another story that dealt with civies in combat zones just trying to survive. I liked how it looked at that piece we never really get into in games and universes like this. Seeing the triage and work to bring wounded soldiers back up to snuff is pretty cool. Good job.